The design and style are great, really digging the shoulder pads on the jacket x3
I think the VHS effect is a nice touch, but it looks a little washed out, more like a fog than a tape distortion, it lacks the sparks of colour and vibrancy you often get with old VHS playback
Weirdly enough I recently watched a tutorial about simulating video glitches, it has a really bold outcome that could work great with your choice of colours.
thank you, since i kinda want to draw another 80s girl like this i might use this tutorial heheh
Really great pose and shading, love the details on the shoes ^_^
tnx . nice to hear from you :D
It's so nice to look at this as a whole, when you zoom in you can see all the simplistic and key shapes that go into making this a fantastic landscape.
I love the pencil strokes and touches of colour in the sky ^_^
The thick rough lineart is great, it has an awesome unique look that give a lot of weight and presence to the character.
Oh thank you!
Nice work ^_^ I like the different sizes of everyone, it makes for a really eye catching group shot.
There's a few things that could have more depth though. The central character doesn't have much definition in his ear/jaw line. It kind of looks like it curves up into nothing.
The font choice is also a bit basic, there's no life in its placement or design. A unique font or logo would have been a wonderful addition to work alongside the group shot. Right now there's some empty room created by the spacing of the letters, which sort of throws off the layout of the page.
Other than that, it's a cool cover that showcases a great range of characters :3
Yeah I'm trying to think up a logo design for the story but I'm not sure -
I'm pretty terrible at designing that type of stuff
Amazing concept, the wiry structures of the city look incredible.
The silhouetted building look great against the desert backdrop, it gives off a mysterious and somewhat haunting vibe, especially with the frame of rock looming over the foreground.
Awesome work ^_^
Her features are wonderful, love the exaggerated lips and eyes, the blue pupils work really well against the browns/greys ^_^
Just want to say again how awesome this is ^_^ it was such a nice surprise, and I'm honored you would draw Lolly as part of your 1 a day challenge.
Im really glad you liked it :3
That really encourages me to keep practicing and improving
I may draw more of your characters, also i cant wait for chapter 2
Great model sheet, looks really clean and professional ^_^
Amazing work; that shade of blue looks fantastic against the monochrome character, especially with the sketchier shading style and added detail ^_^
thanks man, much appreciated
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